Talk:The Wyrm and the Undying

This is an overbringing from http://www.potw.org/archive/potw240.html. The words matched in the poem are as follows.

Dragon n = Wyrm. Seems like the best word at this time.

Furious adj = Angry.

Rage n = Madness. Did not want to use 'Anger' as 'Angry' is used in the line before.

Darting vb = Flitting. A French borrowing of Teutonish wellspring. Wasn't sure if I should replace it or not. But I think Flitting is the best match.

Grappling vb = Gripping. Another Teutonish French borrowing, again I wasn't sure if Grappling should be replaced or not.

Coils n = Whorls.

Martyrd vb = Tholed?

Music n = Gleesong? I know Glee is already listed as a match for music, but I have my qualms about it. It could be confused with the feeling of glee. I thought maybe 'gleesong' May help to narrow the meaning a bit more. Not 100% with this word though as music is a hard word to match.

Breeze n = Light wind.

Vocal adj = Loud.

Faces n = Mugs. I like the word 'mug' but sometimes I feel it may be a bit too informal. Sometimes the more basic words are the hardest to find matches for.

Planets n = Worlds.

Ageless adj = Timeless.

Tenderly adj = Carefully. Softly could also be used, but I think Carefully is better in this context.

Chanting vb = Singing.